Red Rose on the Riverbed

My thoughts have been muted by someone or something since my last post. Is it by you?? or your Ignorance? May be my silence over someone’s Ignorance.

I tried hard to pendown few writings but all are resting in the draft with partial makeover. I could decorate and bring this poem of “Red Rose” on this stage of my page for now. Read it, you may like it and I would forever cherish your shared thoughts as sweet memories. Thank you.

On the day of fullmoon 
A Rose has dressed up red
Resting on the river bed
With the ornament of moon light

Shining in the dark night
Mesmerizing the Moon and Stars With the beauty and mild fragrance

In the stillness of silence Finding it's true bliss Showing off its solace Capturing the love souls

From the Moon to Earth
The love hearts beneath
The thrills of Feelings Deep intense of desires

Dandelion souls of wind Feelings out of the mind Wandering to be flown
The fondness for roses
The love Souls blown
The petals of red rose

The flower of the falcon The symbol of pure love
God's wish of attraction
Good is it's affection
Sad is it's affliction


Copyright ©️ Suma Reddy

My Garden of thoughts and feelings, sow a seed of good deed if you visit. Thank you, Suma ✍❣

150 thoughts on “Red Rose on the Riverbed

      1. Most welcome akka. I think you have 2 websites.
        I saw another one also. But I couldn’t able to comment there.

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      2. Yes, akka. Almost 10days back.
        I read that post akka. Really surprised to see my name there. I wanted comment there, but it couldn’t possible to me. Comment chesthumte submit kaledu.

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    1. That’s true, when my thoughts mutes me to silence, my Soul takes a free imagery tour to the beautiful places n things I love. Thanks a lot for sharing your views Chrish. 😇🧡

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      1. Het is nederland maar heb het even via vertaler voor je vertaalt.

        Your poem evokes a certain sense of love.
        Which often involves torment.
        A beautifully written poem full of emotion.

        Aum Shanthi

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  1. I read it for three times but still can’t get over it……..
    This is so pure and I really don’t have words for this precious and priceless poem ,❤️❤️ ……
    This picture reminded me of my garden rose…….

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    1. Awesome to know that you too have roses in your garden like mine. You made my heart fly in the air with your wonderful n profound priceless comments today. Thanks a lot for taking your time to read them dear one. Happy evening 😇🧡

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      1. 💜 Excellent SupaSoulSis, these aren’t really issues for me but if you are Seeking Perfection then there is a missing carriage return and no mention of Goddess; perhaps a Form of The Word ‘DIVINITY!!!’ would be better than the Masculine “God”, Gender Neutral 🤔 ?

        …💛💚💙…

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      2. 💜 …perhaps “Divines wish of attraction…”; an apostrophe is only used to indicate a missing letter like “it’s” rather than “it is”, otherwise ‘its mine’ is my understanding and I May Be Wrong

        …💛💚💙…

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      3. 💜 YOU!!! ARE Most Welcome SupaSoulSis; it’s a Pleasure to Share and Serve, Stay Strong and Serene

        …💛💚💙…

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    1. Hi Julia, I really apologize. I am really not sure how your comment went into the spam. I was just checking n found your beautiful comment. Thank you very much for your lovely thoughts on it 😇❤

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  2. “On the day of fullmoon
    A Rose has dressed up red
    Resting on the river bed
    With the ornament of moon light “!
    What a mesmerising poetry ,Suma!Your poetry came alive almost literally in the form of a red rose on the river bed bathing in moonlight as if adorned in a silvery ornament! I loved it!Thanks for sharing 💕

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    1. Hi Sir, I apologize for missing the response to your beautiful comments. Your words are very profound and added more beauty to the bathing “Rose and shining silver Moon”. My heart is filled with happy smiles with your lovely thoughts. Thank you very much for visiting. 😇❤🙏

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    1. Your strong words of motivation means so much to me my dear lovely friend. Thanks a lot for reading my ❤ n appreciating my writings as always. Loves to you 🧡🙏😇

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  3. 💜 YOU ASKED!!! For “correction” SupaSoulSis; please don’t get upset:

    “On the day of fullmoon
    A Rose has dressed up red
    Resting on the river bed
    With the ornament of moon light

    Shining in the dark night
    Mesmerizing the Moon and Stars With the beauty and mild fragrance

    In the stillness of silence Finding it’s true bliss Showing off its solace Capturing the love souls

    From the Moon to Earth
    The love hearts beneath
    The thrills of Feelings
    Deep intense of desires

    Dandelion souls of wind Feelings out of the mind Wandering to be flown
    The fondness for roses
    The love Souls blown
    The petals of red rose

    The flower of the falcon The symbol of pure love
    Divines wish of attraction
    Good is it’s affection
    Sad is it’s affliction”

    By @Bio-Blogger

    …💛💚💙…

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      1. 💜 YOU!!! ARE Most Welcome SupaSoulSis; it’s a Pleasure to Share and Serve, Stay Strong and Serene

        …💛💚💙…

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  4. Thanks for your lovely response to my thoughts on your mesmerising poem! Sometimes I start envying you poets on realizing as to how much happiness you must be deriving out of creating such beautiful creations ! But then one can’t deliberately become a poet without possessing a “poet’s heart “♥️ So keep up the great work and share your happiness with your beloved readers, Suma🙏

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    1. Thank you very much again for your great words of motivation Sir. Sure I will, please keep up your support to me as usual. Feedback as well if any, I am happy to receive n improve 😇✌

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      1. Hahaha not like that. Its just a pastime activity I do when I have nothing else to do. When you have read a lot and your mind is exploding with too much knowledge that this happened👻 You are awesome, dear.

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