Dear human!
You know your journey
You know your destiny
But the need of money?
Beyond the basic needs
Searching your agony!
We get to see a dead body
On our journey of each day
Traveling to it's destiny
After a beautiful journey
On the way to heaven/hell
The soul may rest on hill
Looking at the mournings
Knowing breath stands still
Finally the life is chill
There's no beauty left
There's no charm left
There's no love left
There's only a soul left
Everything has been theft
By the beauty called death
Existence ended on earth
This is the so called truth
With no plans and schedules
No comparison of rich & poor
No matter of day & night
No intimation of when & how
That is how the life we live
Everything is a dilution
But we live in illusion
Knowing the exact conclusion
Any moment of the day can start without you. Stop and breath, before you stop breathing.
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My Garden of thoughts and feelings, sow a seed of good deed if you visit. Thank you āā£
You know your poem is just sooo good šš
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Yah! Thank you much Aparna šā¤
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It’s my pleasure dear š¤©š
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excellent sumaā¦loved itā¦can i share it with your permissionā¦.YBR
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My pleasure to hear that dear YBR, please go ahead ā¤š
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Thank youā¦YBR
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very nice..
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Thank you Sir šš
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Such raw truths, Suma. I absolutely love it! Wonderful flow and beautiful picture. Amazing as always, dear friend.ā¤ļø
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I am really glad to read your kind words n thank you so much for the appreciation dear Grace ā¤ š
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Always a pleasure, Suma.ā¤ļø
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Thank you very much ā¤š
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Well expressed Sumaā¦birth and death are the destiny and what we do in between is our Karma. Unfortunately, a vast majority gets so busy chasing money and luxuries in the bargain forgetting that at the end of the journey it will be only soul left with all material gains left behind.
Stay blessed Suma.
Keep blogging..keep inspiring.
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Glad to read your great thoughts and I am truly greatful for your appreciation blessings n continued support Krish. Thank you very much for your valuable time in reading n sharing your incredible thoughts as always šā¤š
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You are welcome Suma.
As long as you continue to write good I will appreciate..šš
Stay blessed always šš¹š
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I would never fail to receive such valuable rewards. Once again thanks for the blessings Krish šš
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The harsh reality weāre living with.
Very beautiful description, Suma.
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Thank you very much for putting your valuable thoughts Abhi šš
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This is so true and humbling. Great poem. Thankfully death is not the end. Glory to our Amazing Father in heaven!ā¤ļø
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Exactly dear Zina, yes the existence ends only on earth as soul reaches the God. Thank you very much for taking your time to read n share your lovely thoughts šā¤š
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I love your writing. They are awesome and this one is awesome too!! Lots of love ššā¤ā¤ā¤
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I respect your time in reading my work n sharing your beautiful thoughts. Thank you very much. Loves to you šā¤
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Great post! š
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Glad you liked it, thank you very much ā¤š
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Beautiful and so thought provoking I must say. šš»š
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That means a lot to me, thank you very much for visiting n sharing your lovely views n thoughts šā¤ š
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This is soo beautiful ā¤ļøā¤ļø
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I am very much glad to read your beautiful words Gopika. Thank you very much n I love your name šā¤
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Haha thankss šā¤ļø
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Stop and breathe before you stop breathing! Such a beautiful message, dear ā¤ļø
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Glad you liked it Shweta, thank you so much for taking your time to read n share your thoughts ā¤ š„°
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A bit philosophical. Thoughtful lines, Suma. Good onešš
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Glad to hear it from you Sir. Thank you very much for reading šš
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š Beautiful; this is Perfectly Put SupaSoulSis
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Thank you very much for reading n appreciating SupaSoul friend ā¤š
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Absolutely true dear. I love the last two lines which is undeniable!!I wish everyone have to read thisā¦. Beautiful write as always. ā¤ļøā¤ļøšš
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Glad you liked it my dearest sweetheart. Loves to you for reading n appreciating my work as always Preeths. I am much greatful n thank you very much šā¤š
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Fantastically conceived of a great writer created out of pain
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Whatever the cause of pain, it has gained this comment from a precious one so it’s really sweet to bear. Thank you very much for taking your time to read n share your thoughts….Little ā¤
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exactly
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Awesome photo and realityās life poem ,so nice one š·ššā„ļøš·
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It means a lot coming from you dear friend. Glad to read you as always thank you very much ā¤šš
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Most welcome dear Suma šš·šš»ā„ļøš
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Excellent š.
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Thank you very much Ma’am, means a lot ā¤šš
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My pleasure
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Very astute wisdom in this poem, Suma. š
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Thank you very much for reading n adding your valuable thoughts dear Chrish ā¤š
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Thank you Jon šš
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It was a wonderful read! š
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Thank you very much for visiting n sharing your thoughts Sowjanya šā¤
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Well said š«š»
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Thank you so much š
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Thatās beautiful
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Glad you liked it, thank you very much for reading ā¤šš
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Death is a hardcore reality. I am greatly touched by your poem. Keep writing dear Suma.
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Glad to hear your profound thoughts dear Rabia, means more than a world to me. Thank you very much for taking time to read n appreciate. Sure I will šā¤
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Where have you been so long?? Hope you are doing good dear š„°
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Busy to solve real life chaosšš thanks for asking though. How are you?
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Same here ššstill trying to write n relieve from the stress. I am doing good sweetheart. Take care. š„°ā¤
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Oh i hope you heal well. Unlike you, I give up easily when something went wrong. Thinking about death and dying is two different perspective. Isnt it? Quite opposite.
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Thanks for your wish dear, they really are very different. Hope to see you soon here n wish you all the happiness keep smiling my sweet. Ping me anytime if you feel to. Loves n hugs tc ā¤
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Yeah sure. No problem. Take care dear.
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This is such a great thought expressed so beautifully. Well written Suma!
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Thank you so much for sharing your valuable thoughts Vighnesh, I am really glad to read your kind words ā¤š
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Wow! Beautifully pennedšš¼šš¼
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I am really glad to read your beautiful thoughts n views Deeksha šā¤
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Very well said š
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Great to hear your sweet words dear Raksha. Thank you very much šā¤
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Wow. What an impressive take on afterlife. I always wonder what happens when one diesā¦.your version is both scary yet possible š¤Æā¤
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Yah it’s really scary to imagine but is the fact as we all know dear. Thank you much for sharing your beautiful views as always š„°ā¤
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beautifulā¤
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So sweet of you, glad you liked it. Thank you very much šā¤
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You are a priceless lady, a great writer, and we love you here as such. Pain as Love are rare parts and parcels of life and condition us to survive and conquer in Life!
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How do I miss to say? Really are my precious priceless jewelz and strength to conquer. Your words of wisdom is awesome forever. Thank you so much.
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We met and learnt lots and tons from each other and I respect you and love you in writing history forever!
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Me too.
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Wowww..! My sweetie, Iām very very happy to see your wonderful post..! Such a marvellous and touching piece..! I loved it very much..! And You are āTHE RHYMING QUEEN AWARDā goes to princess Suma..! Youāre such a sweet candy my sweetie..! Youāre the sweetest than a chocolate..! Youāre a gem.! Iām very lucky to know you my sweet..! Love and hugs my beautiful Cinderella..!šā¤ļøš¤š
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Oh! Lovely sweetheart, thank you soooo much with big hugs. Loves to you from me n baby too. You always bring happiness along with a pure smile to me dear sweet Cinderella. Your continued support is much appreciated n I am truly greatful to you dear one ā¤š
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Awww..! My beautiful Cinderella, youāre very welcome..! Itās absolutely my pleasure..! Wow! Loves form you and baby!! Wow!! Your loves are very precious dear..! Tons of love to you and sweet little princess..! Woww!! Your lovely words touched my heart deeply my sweetie..! Iām support is always there for you my dear..! Iām very lucky to know you my sweet..! ā¤ļøš¤š¤
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Wowā¦ Really wonderfulā¦ Soo trueā¦ Life for others will go on.. Whether we are there or notā¦ Nicely framedā¦ šššš
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I am so glad to read your precious thoughts Ma’am. Thank you very much for taking your valuable to read. šā¤š
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Good Rhythm poetry suma ššš absolutely Nice ā¤ļøšš
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Thank you so much Jyothi, glad you liked it š„°ā¤
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Welcome šš¹
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“…Any moment of the day can start without you. Stop and breath, before you stop breathing…”
So many of us forget to really breath, because we think we are living… but life should be more than being on autopilot… running after coloured paper, or stones in the earth, or smelted metal, or one dangling on one’s arm…
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Really, that’s what happening with everyone in life mostly. No time to breathe until the time comes to stop breathing. I truly admire your valuable views n thoughts on this my friend. Thank you very much for taking your time to read n give such a beautiful acknowledgement. šā¤š
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Reflective thoughts woven into a beautiful poem, Suma, about the realities and mysteries of life. āØš
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That’s really a value add, mysteries of life exactly. Thank you very much for your time n precious thoughts my dear Michele šā¤
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You are welcome. š Happy day to you sweet, Suma. š
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Wish you too a great week ahead dear sweetheart Michele. Loves n hugs šā¤š
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So sweet of you. That is you! š¤šš
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This is just beautiful! So much of wisdom and painful truth in one amazing poem. Lovely! š¤ Loved the last line, stop and breathe before you stop breathing. I also love how you say that whatās left of us in the end is only the soul and none of the material possessions. Very well done! š¤šš
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Your thoughts n views are really unique Samsahana. Glad to know that you loved it dear. Thank you very much for adding such valuable thoughts to it šā¤
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A fantastic poem, dear Suma. I love this part most.
āThat is how the life we live
Everything is a dilution
But we live in illusion
Knowing the exact conclusionā Profound, and truth. Love it, my friend. ā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Means a lot such kind appreciation coming from you Jeff. Happy to know that your liked it. Thank very much for sharing your valuable thoughts šā¤š
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Youāre most welcome, Suma. Always, always. That is so kind, thank you. I loved it, my friend. ā¤ļøš¤š
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Amazing! I love the last stanza
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Glad you liked it, thank you much for reading n sharing your beautiful thoughts š„°ā¤
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WonderfulāØ
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Thank you very much dear friend šā¤
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Happy to know that you liked it dear friend. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts šā¤
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Profound thoughts about life and death and the journey in between. You expressed your thoughts beautifully in a rhyming style. Loved it Suma.
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Means a lot Sowmya, thank you very much for taking your time to read n acknowledge soo beautifully šā¤
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Wow, what a haunting poem, given what is happening around the world with global warming and pandemic and everything. Your poem is rather apt to describe the feeling.
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I am soo glad to hear your precious views and thoughts dear Haoyan. Your comment is truly a value add. Thank you very much šā¤š
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Kiitos š viestistƤ
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Thank you very much šā¤
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A breathtaking poem! The last few lines were just sublime! ā¤ļø
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That means a lot to me. Thank you very much for reading n sharing your valuable thoughts šā¤
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Youāre welcome!š
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Wow Suma,
I love that you approached this poem head on with such truths reminding us to appreciated the time we have and to ātake that breath before we stop breathingā. Good wake up call my princessšā£ļøā£ļøš
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Your precious thoughts and lovely support is priceless my dear Queen. Means beyond the world to me. Very glad to read your profound reflections. Ghanm you soo doo much with loves,hugs n respect always šā¤š
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Outstanding poetry. Gorgeous depthšš
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That means a lot dear Jude. Glad you liked it. Thank you very much for taking your time to read šā¤š
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Hi Suma,
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I have gone thru briefly n found some cake recipes Lokesh, I will have to read again may be more posts.
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Ok.
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You post amazing contentš¤© have a look to my blog and please follow like share Iāll be thankful to you š¹
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Thank you very much for reading. Sure I will check your blog too.
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Like a beautiful piece of artā¤ļøāØ
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Your beautiful words means a lot, thanks a lot for reading šā¤š
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Loved it suma
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Thank you very much Ankita š„°ā¤
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Very deep one. Loved it āŗļø
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Glad to know you loved it, many thanks for reading and sharing your beautiful thoughts šā¤
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The poem indicates the supreme truth of life.
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Your words speak great facts too. Glad to read your beautiful views n thoughts. Thank you very much for reading šā¤š
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This is so well writtenā¦ Excellent and profound workā¦
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Hi Ashish, glad to see you visiting. Thank you very much for reading šā¤š
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My pleasure to read such a wonderful pieceā¦ š
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Love this poem, wonderfully powerful word weaving šø
Thinking about the end gives me chills.
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Thank you very much for reading n sharing such lovely views n thoughts. Of course one day we all will get to chill down only then the peace to this Soul. Be blessed n take care dear friend ā¤ šš
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Perfect photo at the end..
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Outstanding lines diduuuuāŗ
Do not treat yourself as a slave of circumstances. We are the creator of our own destiny. As well as destroyer. So letās go ahead nowššš
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Wow, just amazing my dear bro…I am so glad to see you sharing such a wonderful n creative thoughts. I got power from your strong words. Yes ofcourse life is like that we just have to accept n moveforward. Will they give ššā¤
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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Thank you so much šā¤ š
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