On a Rainy day
When clouds are dark
My thoughts in the park
Deeply into nature’s look
I feel you from my back
Warmth of your breath flake
Making me to feel like a snow flake
Our thoughts are flowing like a lake
When we had no choice to make
Our eyes got pleased to set back
With no words to wishper or speak
It’s raining
We both are rinsing
Our thoughts are syncing
Our hearts are feeling
Our souls are romancing
My body & voice are trembling
Your wishperings are pleasing
When our breaths are slow striking
Moon must be out there peeping
Stars must be there twinkling
The pleasure of heavenly feeling
Tears in my eyes are streaming
My heart started questioning
Why was I only be dreaming?
How can I stop my heart from fainting?
You & Me will ever be really meeting?
The answer? God must be knowing!
From: Suma Reddy
To: Van Prince

My Garden of thoughts and feelings, sow a seed of good deed if you visit.Thank you, Suma ✍❣
Copyright ©️ Suma Reddy
How beautifully expressed! ✨
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Thank you very much dear 🙂💖
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Lovely poem
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Thank you Sowmya 😊
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Nothing is 100% pure and perfect but God
yet Rain purifies love with its raindrops solution
elemination poison dilutuion
creating between woman and man a pure union
of love of joy of happiness-
Love
is, by far, the greatest Gem of Life
rising out of Natrue surrounded by its contours of beauty
bridging the gap between finite and infinite between two loves
each saying, “I love your forever”-
Love is the cornerstone of Love,
the beginning, middle, and encore of all love’s concessions
from ABCD to-WXYZ in every love equation
demonstration love is Royal Flush, the greatest value of innovation-
Love-is-Love-is-love=Love-on love-in-love-
By: Van Prince
To: Suma Reddy
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My favorite notification always n forever would be your priceless n precious comment.
The love I feel is you
The love I believe is you
The love I cherish is you
The feel in love is you
I wake up every morning to feel you
And fill my day with your
beautiful thoughts.
Love you n thank you my Dear Prince.
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*Suma catching water in a pitcher where theair isn’t polluted is the purest water we can drink better than Springwater=the fountain of youth of health and wellness! Our love is more pure than rainwater and Springwater!!*
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thanks for reblogging Ned.😍😇
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Such a beautiful poem 😻
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Thanks a lot, beautiful comment too 🙂 💖
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Well done. 🙂
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Thank you very much Mark 🙂💖
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Very beautiful one 🥰🥰🥰
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Thank you Vani ❤ beautiful comment too 🥰
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An expressive poem from an open and sharing heart. 💖
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Thanks a lot for visiting n commenting dear Michele 🙂💖😇
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🌷🌹
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Thank you Vicky 😇 💖
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Wow, what a surprise ending. I love it.
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Thanks a lot my dear lovely Haoyando. 🙂💖You felt it surprised really appreciated and you know for me it’s always a thriller suspense 😌
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Loved the rhythm and emotion.
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Glad to know that you loved it Jude, thank you 😊
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My pleasure.
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Lovely lines! Beautiful expression!!
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Thank you very much Sir 😊 🙏
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Lovely poem, this is one of my favourites. Thank you again for sharing.
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Wow, very amazing to know that this is being your favorite piece. Your beautiful n precious comment means so much to me. Tons of thanks for sharing your views. Loves to you my friend 🙂😇💖🙏
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In all honesty, I like how you write. I enjoy reading all your posts. You write from the heart. You have a unique talent. Thank you for sharing such wonderful words.
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It means a lot to my heart. My talent might not be better than yours n very thankful for your kind n positive words dear friend. 😇💖🙏
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This is a good one. Nice post
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Thank you very much for visiting 😊
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My absolute pleasure friend.
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Sweet of you 😇👍
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Beautiful poem. Thanks for this 🙂
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My pleasure, thank you for reading through n commenting. 🙂💖
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👍
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Thank you 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful, Suma. Truly enjoyed. 💖
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Thank you very much Grace 😇💖
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My pleasure, Suma.💕
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😇💖
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Lovely poem and a great rhyme scheme!!
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Many many thanks for the beautiful n lovely comment 😇💖
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🥰❤️
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Awwww… How lovely!!! I love how the rhyming just flows until the end… 👏👏
The reader exactly feels what the writer intended to. Great work dear Suma. 🥰🥰🤗🤗
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Thamk you very much for visiting me n sharing your lovely feelings n thoughts dear friend. Glad to see you around. 😇💖🥰
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What a lovely and romantic poem!
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Thank you very much for reading n leaving the lovely comment Raj 😇💖
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Wow
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Van Prince really and truly and surely and truly and thoroughly love you Suma!
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This is lovely and beautiful… Excellent work… Liked it… 🙂
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Thank you very much for reading thru n leaving a beautiful comment Ashish. 😇💖
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Your thoughts is nice
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Thank you 🙃
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Mention not , you deserve it☺
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😇🙏
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😊
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Wonderful! Rainy Day!! Rain has got something which changes mood of any person. All of us know, that Rain brings joy. We all wait for the rain. It has beautiful rhythm.
Fantastic writing!
Regards
arun
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Thank you very much for reading thru n sharing your thoughts Arun Ji. Rain n it’s rhythm really brings magical joy to one’s soul. Who don’t love rain, eagerly awaiting for June rains. Thanks again 😇🙏
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So beautiful to stand in the rain 😻
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ooooh laaaa la I love this wonderful poem raining love and joy Sumatriptans💖
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Music was missing in the rain, now my dear Cindy you tuned it n made most beautiful & romantic 🤗🤗🥰🙈❤🙏😇
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ohhhhh sooo glad you enjoyed the additions sweet friend❣️❣️❣️ xo
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🥰❤
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Excellently written!
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Thanks a lot for stopping by n reading thru. Lovely comment 😇🙏
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You have some very thought provoking writing!
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Really happy to hear that dear friend. Thanks for the feedback 😇🙏
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The erotic temperature of the poem increases with every line… well that you ended in the arms of God… or all would be consumed…
🇯🇲🏖️
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ha ha! At the end divine God is he who holds me in his arms always 🙏 Thank you very much for reading n sharing your lovely thoughts on it. I was all belonged to him if he wanted to consume…sorry….🙈
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🇯🇲🏖️
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I love the dynamics of this poem! 🙂
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I can’t skip reading your lovely thoughts. Thanks a lot for reading thru 😇 💖
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Nice poem😊
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Oh! Sooo cute it was about rain n umbrella so you liked it. Glad cutie Doll. Loves to you from this Didi ❤ 🤗
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