Lonely travel of life

Life is a Gem
Never is a blame
Learn to bloom
Turn around time
Day&night are same

Akin to life&death
So, deeply breath
From heart beneath
Efforts are worth
Gain the strength

Rise up and move on
Learn to walk alone
The path you choosen
Become your own boon
Focus on your reason
And make a decision

No one is for you
Nothing is your's
Even by a chance,
Though in bad times
Never think in worse
But feel it's verse

Just play your role
Be true to your will
It's a life's travel
Pay the bill of toll
In the journey of hell
To the heaven's shell

Truth is only God
Wake up from the bed
Out from dream land
As your wishes demand
And thoughts command
Live like a legend
Until your travel end


Copyright ©️ 2021 Suma Reddy all rights reserved.

Life is a challenging journey.
Be brave and learn to travel alone
until you reach your final destiny.

My Garden of thoughts and feelings, sow a seed of good deed if you visit. Thank you ✍❣

123 thoughts on “Lonely travel of life

  1. Oh my dear..! Wowww..! This is a masterpiece..! I love love it very much..! You are really a Gem..! Woww..! What a Marvelous piece..! I’m speechless..! You are an angel..!

    Wowww my dear..! I think you are reading my mind..! Just now I thought I want some motivation I was reading bloggers post and I saw yours and start to read I don’t know what happen to me I became very powerful and strong..!

    Yes, life is a challenge..! It will give many problems but we want to face it and break it..! Sure one day we will get success..!

    You are the motivator..! This piece really powerful and motivation..! And I loved the whole piece..! Especially I love the stanza,

    “Rise up and move on
    Learn to walk alone
    The path you choosen
    Become your own boon
    Focus on your reason
    And make a decision”

    “No one is for you
    Nothing is your’s
    Even by a chance,
    Though in bad times
    Never think in worse
    But feel it’s verse”

    “Just play your role
    Be true to your will
    It’s a life’s travel
    Pay the bill of toll
    In the journey of hell
    To the heaven’s shell”

    “Truth is only God
    Wake up from the bed
    Out from dream land
    As your wishes demand
    And thoughts command
    Live like a legend
    Until your travel end”

    Oh my dear I can’t pick my favourite piece..! Because, the whole poem is became my favourite one of yours..! Sure I will save this with me..! I will always read this piece..! You are the gift..! Fantastic my dear..! Love and big big hugs to you my dear..!
    – FILARANCE 💖

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    1. Oh! My sweetest as I was reading your mind, in reverse you awaited until I rectified my disabled comment section which had happened without my notice.

      I am very very happy n my heartfelt gratitude for your precious priceless review and understanding of these deep thoughts of life. I would like to thank million times and knitting each of your expressions to my heart n these would stay there forever. Loves to you back my dear Cinderella 😇❤

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      1. Ohh my sweetie, your words touched me deeply..! How kind and lovely you are..! You are an angel..! It’s so awesome to hear from you my dear..! Never forget your heart touching words and poems..!🤗🤗

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  2. No one is for you
    Nothing is your’s
    Even by a chance,
    Though in bad times
    Never think in worse
    But feel it’s verse

    Just play your role
    Be true to your will
    It’s a life’s travel
    Pay the bill of toll
    In the journey of hell
    To the heaven’s shell

    Just wow 😍🔥 amazing 👌❣️

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  3. How can I express my happiness, after reading your poetry, I don’t know.
    I needed some boost up today, right now. And I got your marvelous poetry. It was indeed my requirement at the moment. So shared your poetry in facebook.
    Stay blessed always 🙏

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    1. Namaste Arun ji, I am always greatful for your valuable time for visitibg me n sharing such rare views and I am glad you found my thoughts to consider for your today’s situation. Thanks a lot for boosting my knowledge with your precious feedback always n especially your greatness to share my opinion with others on fb. Please consider my special respect as always 😇❤🙏

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      1. Yeah I was shuttered today morning. And then I got one calmness after reading your post. This is called connection to Almighty God. He makes us happy when we are connected. What form He does that is miracle, I believe.
        Thank you so much.
        Take care

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    1. Yes truly Sir. Thank God I was able to rectify my disabled comment section before your visit. I was very very upset n felt that my heart has been blocked coz I couldn’t digest seeing my comments being freezed with no interaction for my heartfelt post. Once again thank you much for all your precious reviews n your thoughts. 😇❤

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  4. Another gem from your pen rather I should say from your creative mind….
    God is the only ultimate truth in life…rest all is based on our perceptions….all of us have our own purpose and got to live our own way…no one and nothing is ours..they are there to play a role and move on…
    Stay blessed Suma..
    Keep blogging….keep inspiring.
    🙏🌹🙏

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    1. Hi Krish, I thought I missed your precious contribution to my post as you know the comments were off and I really couldn’t understand how it has occurred. Thank you very much for coming back and sharing your valuable thoughts on the truth of life. Your feedback n comments really matter n add some more profound facts to it. Great thoughts n thanks again for sharing 😇❤🙏

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    1. You are my gorgeous sweetheart, I am very glad to see you sharing such beautiful thoughts n feelings to my writings always dear. It means so much to my heart. Loves to you ❤😇

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  5. This one is a gem. I ain’t getting words to appreciate it…. You are an angel, I mean your poem just brightened up the days of many…. Yes, it did and especially mine …. Every line is a gem, no, it is even more precious than that….. Couldn’t thank you enough for this one. I was really not doing well today and boom💥, God heard my voice. In simple words,you saved my day . Sending loads of love ❤️

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    1. Dear Aanchal, each of your words touched my heart dear one. I am just thanking God for giving such precious friends to be mine connected here. Stay blessed n happy always. You have stamped your kindness on my many posts. Millions of thanks and words can’t explain my love to you. XOXO 🥰❤🙏✌

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  6. I saw myself getting motivated by the end. We need to walk on the path alone make a path for ourselves. So true “Life is a challenging journey.
    Be brave and learn to travel alone
    until you reach your final destiny.”
    It’s may be just what I needed to hear..

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  7. Truth is only God
    Wake up from the bed
    Out from dream land
    As your wishes demand
    And thoughts command
    Live like a legend
    Until your travel end

    This line gave me goosebumps🥺
    Very very deep lines didiii🌺🤗

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      1. Mere Bhai, kya baat hai kya baat hai soo soo sweet and yes your precious advice has been accepted by this Di…bhai se bahijaan ka promotion milgaya aapko. J9kes apart my bro I really have thoughts to do that but aap ki suggestion to keep this poem as 1st is truely awesome n I am very much happier to listen this. Thanks a ton Shanky bro 😇🙏❤

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      2. 😍😍😍😍
        Aap start kijiye didi poem ko collect krna…..mai designing se publishing tk ka safar ready kr duga Or fir review ka v……aap tnsn ni lijiye sb kuch ho jayega…..sirf likheye🤗🤗

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      3. This means pricesless to me n I am speachless dear bro. Suchi karoge?? Really my greatitude would be lifetime. Very heart touching thoughts bro I am really in joy with no words to write. Let me write few more will do for sure 😇🙏❤

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      4. High and higher and highest. That is your position. Reach there. Not only you will enjoy, people will enjoy. My comments are honest and write that what comes out of my heart. I have seen the life from very close distance as well from far point. Amazing is this life. I understood it very late. But I see your poetries have weight. Your words are very true in nature. So I appreciate your lines. I think it is equally important for a reader to write honest comments.
        Stay blessed always. God bless you all. Regards 🙏

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  8. ‘Rise up and move on’, ‘learn to walk alone’, and ‘be true to your will’ – all really good advice for life. I also liked the rhythym in this poem and the clever use of rhyme. This deeply introspective piece truly made me think about life. Thanks for sharing!

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      1. Can we tag here people on our posts… Lately I had been using an app for writing where I could tag ppl… But here I didn’t even got a single read.. and its a bit difficult for me to understand this platform completely…

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  9. Words can’t describe the beauty of this masterpiece.
    Describing every phase of life along with solutions.

    “Unless we focus on our reason, we can’t propose a decision” ~ Enough to motivate anyone with any genre of problem.

    Gem of a post, Suma.
    Have a good day ahead!

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      1. Thank you for appreciation. I am trying to become a writer whose writing would be liked. I sometimes get demoralized when too less likes or views appear but I know I need to work harder 🙂

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      2. That really disappoints but a writer’s aim sh/only be writing irrespective of likes n comments. Keep writing keep visiting co-bloggers definitely you will get it back. I will make sure to visit your blog as you did it to mine. Boost up yourself n rise up to the skyline of your blog tag.

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      3. Write and write. Think and write.
        Read and write. Automatically your words will come out as a line. Lines as paragraphs. Then pages. Be a writer. Enjoy life. Give enjoyment to others.
        Happy blogging.
        Regards 😊🙏

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    1. Hi Nara, it’s a great pleasure to hear from you. Thank you very much for making my day with your visit. Glad to meet you, when I red about your travel in Himalayas to write a book from Joanna’s blog it made me interesting to follow you but I am yet to go through your blog. Definitely I would. I am greatful for your visit thanks much once again. Stay safe n take care Sir ❤🙏

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